Mass Effect: Hide And Seek P2.2

Is kinda harder make critique for the comics, because comics is not just one page, its complex and very different from one picture - Its details are lowered for need to make lot of pictures in short time etc etc...I try to be fair and don't judge just one page but all 6 and I also try explain how i see each stat and why i rated so<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

Vision-For me, this stat should show, how good the comics represents the Mass Effect universe, if it's something what should never been created, going agaist all canons, or its some decent addon to universe or something supreme deep which makes universe way better?...honestly, it's just few pages without much story exposed, so is very hard to decide if it's deep or if it tell something new and special...so 3 of 5...its good, its not shame for universe but it got not enought pages to be able make a epic story...it's good start

Originality-I guess this stat is pretty clear..so as i can say from my experience, there is not much mass effect good free comicses, it's whole handy draw and not just copy of main plot story...it got new ideas, interesting dialoges and promising story, so Hell yea...originality is your strong point...Maybe I bit overating originality, but for now only few good mass effect comicses keep go...less rivals -better rate<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

Technique-Simply the draw/linking coloring technique. Its decent, for one person its great, but compared to work of more people it's not the best thing possible-It is somewhere betwen average. You really putting a lot effort in textures, especialy on wrex armor and as good may result looks, I'm bit confused, because skin is totaly simple, without offence skin is for me the most weak point of this comics..oversimpled...it should be good if clothes and armors was simply too, but seriously good textured armor and supersimply skin is cocktail hard to swallow.At least 2colors of skin could gently help bypass the grand canyon betwen great made armor and poor made skin. Also colors are bit confusing. Wrex armor is so clear RED but all other colors are so shadowy...i understand its your style you like it, you do it nice, its decent and without doubt enought for comics, but its shadowy average technique.

Impact-For me impact says, how much art blows your minds, how much it hit your emotions. Especialy in comics, how much you lust for next episode. As I sayd in vision rate...Its too few pages to decide such thing. And honestly again, its decent story, no big action or hangover yet...so not much emotions in my head yet...i definetly looking for next page and wanna see it, but i still dont feel completly hooked by story or amaized by dialogues, characters etc...well lets see after more pages<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

I know the rating may look bit underated, but as i sayd on begining...lets judge it as complex work with story and progress...and there is simply not enought pages with such slow story tell to be amaizing enought ...It got potential, its interesting, BUT it definetly dont have technique which take breath and amaize ppl enought itself so it NEED great story or great character or great dialogues...you know comics dont need exelent draw style to be good, BUT without great draw style comics NEED something other to be interesting because the draw style is thing which kick in eyes most...you know, to be interested by story you need to read few pages...to be interested by characters you need to read more pages...to be interested by draw style you need ONE look on any page...which makes thing easier...so when your style is not perfect its not loose, but you need to catch people up on other things and work more harder...i hope this can by any constructive for you and i wish your comics lot more pages and succes<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>